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And I will never forgive you for
what you did to me,
you made me love you forever.
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing piece. Great job in this one! :huggle:
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Student Writer
thank you love!
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure! :D
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That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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Have a wonderful day! :hug: :heart:
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Student Writer
thank you so much!!
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That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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SpiritDuchess Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014
This.

Laser arrow pointed. I am slayed.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Writer
No, no! Live, live darn it!!
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SpiritDuchess Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
Your words strike my heart.
As I feign death, new life courses with the sound of your breath.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student Writer
am i a living universe?
bursting like into my supernova rants,
giving birth to a new heart.
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SpiritDuchess Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
Of course you are a living universe
Comprised of infinity and
Beyond.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Student Writer
No, i have an expiration date
like everything in this universe
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SpiritDuchess Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Your words 

touch more 

than you

will ever

     know.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Writer
to know would be beautiful
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Matches perfectly for a manga i'm reading now. Awesome stuff!
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Writer
what manga are you reading?
& thank you!
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
"You're My Loveprize in Viewfinder" It's explicit yaoi. 
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Writer
AH! i gotta read it then!
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That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Great!  :heart:
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Writer
:highfive:
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abrizelle Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this so, so much. 
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Writer
thankies darling :3
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abrizelle Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're very welcome c:
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TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
awww, so sweet, and nice.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Writer
thank you :heart:
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TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh np! Hey, I just made the first chapter of my novel, wish to read it
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