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i carry hopscotch eyes across
unscientific minds,
but for just this one time -
i'll sustain this imprisoned gaze
upon you.
:iconatlantic-lungs:
i want my wandering eyes to know what freedom is.

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~OniOfTheShade Jul 9, 2012   General Artist
so much power behind short poems.. love it.
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*atlantic-lungs Jul 10, 2012  Student Writer
:bow: thank you!
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~OniOfTheShade Jul 12, 2012   General Artist
You're welcome!
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*ArthurCrow Jun 27, 2012  Professional Writer
Brilliant my friend... clever and gripping!
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*atlantic-lungs Jun 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!! :D
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*ArthurCrow Jun 29, 2012  Professional Writer
You're very welcome :)
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!littleuniverse Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're really good..

I'd like to collaborate with you. Very soon.
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*atlantic-lungs Feb 7, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! :D

indeed, we must!
i am fascinated by your works
and curious how both of ours would
look together,

when?!
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~poeticaldoom Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Marvelous!
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*atlantic-lungs Feb 7, 2012  Student Writer
thankies! :tighthug:
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