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I died numerous times for you

& yet, you still won't admit you shattered everything we
created;
I've got your millions of knives patterned along my back,
please tell me why i'm still here
I should have crossed over before you moved on,
but i never saw the withered heart you keep on the
bottom of your shoes,
It's hurts to realize how much i truly meant you.
No.
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arsenic-sea Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lovely! :)
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student Writer
thankies!!
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arsenic-sea Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you are very welcome
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LupusIntus Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love the emotion and also the indentation style.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
:woohoo:
thankies!
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ravinniaofcreed Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful. It shows great emotion. Well done :clap:
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student Writer
:blush: thank you dear!
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ravinniaofcreed Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome!
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SpiritDuchess Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
What happens when, through time, one becomes numb to each death, each knife thrust no longer finding flesh to pierce. Each year drifts by turning from decades to parts of a century.

and in our pain, she went insane trying to kill him.

You have described me better than I was aware.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student Writer
I really love that piece you've just written,
you should post it!

it's the other side to my story, her evil side.

Thank you so much!
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SpiritDuchess Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
Perhaps our words are the making of the full circle. A circuit I, still, am not ready to traverse. With each step the pain magnifies. with each word. the coals cut deeper.

Perhaps the words will eventually out but today only the fragments can remain.

the feelings in your words can be both prophetic and a story from, oh, so long ago. Perhaps as a cautionary tale, of which I can attest, that to carry too long is to pass insanity and live sanely within this madness. Something I would never wish on a friend.

A part of me hopes this does not make any sense.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student Writer
It does make sense, but it's not something
to repeat in other words.

It's as simple and as complicated as it goes.
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xXPretty-BallerinaXx Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like it.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! !! :heart:
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Lomaiwe Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013   Artist
Phenomenal, as usual. :huggle:
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
XD
Thank you my love! ! :hug:
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Lomaiwe Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013   Artist
:D
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:cry: This is exactly how it went when my ex broke my heart. This is perfect. Thank you for embodying everything I felt for so long and could never find the words to say.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
I understand what you're feeling. (:
There must be so many words to scream.out

Thank you <3
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There are. I've literally and on paper screamed until my throat was raw and I couldn't find any words left. But you've helped me understand how I really feel.

Thank you so much for this missing piece that I've been looking for. :tighthug:
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student Writer
I know something that will help even better,

Crying during a thunderstorm, it's soothing and healing <3
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'll have to wait till summer for that, right now the rain and tears would freeze. ^^ But thanks, I'll do that. :hug:
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