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I died numerous times for you

& yet, you still won't admit you shattered everything we
created;
I've got your millions of knives patterned along my back,
please tell me why i'm still here
I should have crossed over before you moved on,
but i never saw the withered heart you keep on the
bottom of your shoes,
It's hurts to realize how much i truly meant you.
No.
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arsenic-sea Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lovely! :)
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student Writer
thankies!!
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arsenic-sea Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you are very welcome
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LupusIntus Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love the emotion and also the indentation style.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
:woohoo:
thankies!
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ravinniaofcreed Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful. It shows great emotion. Well done :clap:
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student Writer
:blush: thank you dear!
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ravinniaofcreed Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome!
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SpiritDuchess Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
What happens when, through time, one becomes numb to each death, each knife thrust no longer finding flesh to pierce. Each year drifts by turning from decades to parts of a century.

and in our pain, she went insane trying to kill him.

You have described me better than I was aware.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student Writer
I really love that piece you've just written,
you should post it!

it's the other side to my story, her evil side.

Thank you so much!
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