Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
pry open the wall of my past
 &
maybe you'll see what no one
 else wanted too,
       a girl
         who
        wanted
          to
          be
         saved
         before
          the
         demons
        possessed
          the
         remains
           of
           her
         sanity.


But she's cemented to this corner,
        losing her,
where a hundred knocks per hour
 finally becomes those empty
   whimpers repeating thank you
 
thank you for giving the motivation i needed to end it all.

Add a Comment:
 
:iconravenhart:
Ravenhart Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
I love the visual of falling in this. The words just sending chills down my spine.
Reply
:iconatlantic-lungs:
atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Writer
thank you veryy much :huggle:
Reply
:iconimperfect-parachute:
imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
I featured this beautiful poem here: fav.me/d74byq9 :heart:
Reply
:iconatlantic-lungs:
atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
thank you so much!!!!
Reply
:iconimperfect-parachute:
imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome!! =D
Reply
:iconkinggarcia:
KingGarcia Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Hey smile, I am sure everything will be better. I am sorry for everything that is going on. I admire that you can still write even going through something like that.
Reply
:iconatlantic-lungs:
atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Writer
i thank you very kindly, i know things will get better
just have to wait.
Reply
:iconkinggarcia:
KingGarcia Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
:) Hope it gets better
Reply
:iconatlantic-lungs:
atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Writer
thank you! :hug:
Reply
:iconkinggarcia:
KingGarcia Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
What are the faces?
Reply
:iconatlantic-lungs:
atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Writer
they're emoticons,
there are a bunch of them
:glomp:
:woohoo:
:rofl:
Reply
:iconkinggarcia:
KingGarcia Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
I know that part lolv
Reply
:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
Hey, don't leave. I get what you're going through right now, but you make amazing artwork. You should stay.
Reply
:iconatlantic-lungs:
atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Writer
thank you! but it's going to take a lot of me to leave.
I'm not ready yet.
Reply
:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Writer
I understand.
Reply
:iconcronasonlyfriend:
cronasonlyfriend Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That last stanza is so beautifully somber. I love this.
Reply
:iconatlantic-lungs:
atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :huggle:
Reply
:iconcronasonlyfriend:
cronasonlyfriend Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×

Featured in Collections


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
January 20, 2014
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
376 (1 today)
Favourites
28 (who?)
Comments
18
×