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pry open the wall of my past
 &
maybe you'll see what no one
 else wanted too,
       a girl
         who
        wanted
          to
          be
         saved
         before
          the
         demons
        possessed
          the
         remains
           of
           her
         sanity.


But she's cemented to this corner,
        losing her,
where a hundred knocks per hour
 finally becomes those empty
   whimpers repeating thank you
 
thank you for giving the motivation i needed to end it all.

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Ravenhart Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
I love the visual of falling in this. The words just sending chills down my spine.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Writer
thank you veryy much :huggle:
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imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
I featured this beautiful poem here: fav.me/d74byq9 :heart:
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:iconatlantic-lungs:
atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
thank you so much!!!!
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:iconimperfect-parachute:
imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome!! =D
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KingGarcia Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Hey smile, I am sure everything will be better. I am sorry for everything that is going on. I admire that you can still write even going through something like that.
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Writer
i thank you very kindly, i know things will get better
just have to wait.
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:iconkinggarcia:
KingGarcia Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
:) Hope it gets better
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:iconatlantic-lungs:
atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Writer
thank you! :hug:
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:iconkinggarcia:
KingGarcia Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
What are the faces?
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