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"Silence equals Death"

Gash out my confessions,
push me to the edge of misery
so I can screech out the truth
before my voice attacks my essence.

I made my heart weak and left my
eyes stained on my shirt; I've
accumulated verses of agony, but
my vocals cords are tangled
with fear.

You never stop sinking your
resistance into my neck and
now I've grown silent & frozen
because I murdered myself behind
walls of memories.  
"you made me as mute as a mouse, might as well finish off the voice you never wanted to hear."

Inspired by the film, "Tongues Untied"
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arsenic-sea Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
dark and powerful, nicely done :)
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student Writer
thank you dear <33
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arsenic-sea Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you are very welcome! :)
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LupusIntus Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very chilling and emotional.

I love the line "I've accumulated verses of agony, but my vocal cords are tangled."
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
:blush: Thank you!

the line could use more effect to it.
hmmm, i shall start thinking :D
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Lomaiwe Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012   Artist
Girl, you've done it again. Awesome.
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:iconatlantic-lungs:
atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Writer
Ahahaa, :bow:
I'm trying! :D
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februaryblue Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, the last stanza is extremely powerful. Very good.
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:iconatlantic-lungs:
atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Writer
I love it too :D
It hit me hard!!
Thankies!!
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februaryblue Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :D :hug:
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